Rose of Sharon are you gonna leave town tomorrow? I now for sure you cant because we are supposed to be a family together and support each other, when we get to California our life will be better than own dam rich neighbors. There is no need to work at a store we are farmers. We as a family will stay together and we will become a horse in the field, our family will be unstoppable.
At dawn we got to get going now, we depend on getting to the new land the fastest as possible, The journey has been tough Tom, grandpa died and Granma is probably going to soon die to. Tom don’t be scared of what the people in town say about getting food in California. As a family we will make it work.
We cant leave without you, we cannot leave your family behind! You are part a part of our family, I insist... I know your daughter is sick, but please stay with us, we need to be together in order to survive... I understand, " hop on Joads, we gonna get going".
An example of how "Okies" were discriminated.
The dust in the "dust bowl" elevated enourmous amounts of dust which destroyed crops
Image of the dust bowl
The conditions in which migrant farmers had to travel
Grapes of Wrath
The migrant workers traveled in harsh conditions
photo of the " Okies"
1 comment:
Your narration doesn't resemble a monologue. To get the right perspective think of yoursef as a story teller, relating your own experiences using Ma's point of view. When you want to refer to others, as you were when talking about your daughter, you need to lead your audience so taht they understand it is part of your monologue. The way you have this entry it makes me think that I'm going to be hearing primarily a dialogue.
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